Wednesday, February 15, 2023

 

Faith for Tomorrow

All that I have seen teaches me
to trust the Creator
for what I have not seen.
~Unknown


It
is still early and my son and I have shoveled twice today. The snow
continues to fly outside in the face of the warm and inviting fire
inside. As tempting as it is to wallow in the depression that sometimes
is February, I am thankful for each snowflake.
For within each snowflake is the promise of spring.
As
it warms up and the snow gives way to warmer days and spring rains, we
will, as a collective human race, curse the rain that darkens the
spring skies.
What an impatient, short-sighted bunch we are!
If
the spring rains never fell, and the sounds of splashing and joyful
laughter would never have a chance to mount its song over the land.
It
is a horrible truth though - in our darkest days, humans can never see
the light; and in our darkest trials and tribulations, it seems we
sometimes fail to see the love and happiness we seek, even though it is thinly disguised in a different season.
The ironic, deep truth of it all is this:
The things we never see - the spring in the midst of winter,
the bright summer in the midst of monsoon springs,
are always before us -
right, where they've always been -
our challenge is to trust in He who created us
to make the sun visible to human eyes unable to
see the warmth and light of that promise deep within us
even in the depths of a cold night.

Tuesday, February 14, 2023

NEW BOOK ALERT! BUSY FEET

 Courtesy of Vivian Kirkfield's Website  ( https://viviankirkfield.com/2023/02/14 )/happy-book-birthday-busy-feet-plus-giveaway that thrills in anything kidlit, let's join her in applauding the publication of Marcia Berneger's Busy Feet!

 BUSY FEET 

We are definitely dancing for this new picture book that launches today…we are clapping our hands and tapping our BUSY FEET which is the title of this sweet story by Marcia Berneger, illustrated by Susanna Chapman and published by Starry Forest Books. And if you leave a comment on this blog post, you might be the lucky winner of a copy of the book OR a Picture Book Critique!

Here’s a little bit about the book from the Amazon sales page:

Get little feet moving and grooving in no time with this interactive and engaging picture book – perfect for active read-alouds and exploring motion and movement with energetic toddlers.

From former elementary school teacher Marcia Berneger, Busy Feet’s simple, gentle rhyme underscores illustrator Susanna Chapman’s bold, expressive style. This winning combination—along with diverse and inclusive art—makes wiggling around and learning opposites a blast. Little ones will be itching to join the party as the characters dance, hop, and march along!

Feet wake up
Time to play.
Happy feet,
Out all day!

Follow along as adorable baby feet move through a busy day. Where do these feet go? How do they get there? What exciting activities will they get up to? See just how busy little feet can be at playtime, bath time, and more!

Playful and bright, this book is perfect for sharing and gifting. Busy Feet promises full-to-bursting fun for little movers of all ages!

Here’s a little bit about author Berneger and her books:
Marcia Berneger is a retired teacher who lives with her husband and three crazy dogs. She taught first and second grade, special education in grades K-6, and Sunday school through fifth grade. She is also the author of the picture book Buster the Little Garbage Truck and the chapter book A Dreidel in Time. Marcia is a member of SCBWI, 12 x 12, Children’s Book Insider, and the Storyteller Academy. Best of all, she is the proud Grammy of Ori, her first grandchild! She lives in San Diego, California.
To learn more about Marcia and her books: https://marciaberneger.com/index.html

And here’s a little bit about the illustrator:
Susanna Chapman is an illustrator, book designer, and muralist. She is known for illustrating The Girl Who Ran, a picture book biography of Bobbi Gibb, which received a Gold Medal from the Independent Publisher Book Award and Moonbeam Children’s Book Awards, and Elizabeth Warren’s Big, Bold Plans. Susanna lives with her husband in Nashville, TN.
To learn more about Susanna and her work: https://www.susannachapman.com/

Saturday, February 4, 2023

Writers: Are you stuck?

    Have you ever been SO stuck in the depths of a manuscript that you just want to chuck it into a drawer and forget about it? You just can't go on, and you don't know WHY.

   I have been like this a couple of times and when I stumbled across the answer, I was embarrassed. I believe it doesn't matter if you are a pantser (guilty), or an outliner, you can run into problems if you don't KNOW YOUR CHARACTERS!

   So, if you are stuck in a first draft, or you are rewriting and something isn't ringing true, take the time to make out a character sheet for each one of your characters. Ninety percent of the information you write down will not appear in your writing, but the way your characters interact will be honest and their motivations will shine through. These motivations will propel your plot FORWARD, I promise you!

Give it a chance.

   One of the best character "interview" sheets I ever got was from NANOWRIMO. I have since adjusted it for my own use, which you will have to do as well, but here are some sample questions. Remember, to adjust the form for your use. This is used primarily for kidlit, but I believe it is also essential for adult literary pursuits.

!. Do they have a nickname?

2. Birthdate:

3. Gender:

4. Hobbies:

5. Weakness or Fears:

6. Secrets:

7. What does their bedroom look like? Are they sloppy or neat as a pin?

8. Who is their best friend? Why?

9. What is a trait or tick that makes them stand apart from everyone else on the page? A speech or mannerism?

10. Name some personality traits: Are they an introvert, or extrovert, are they organized or a mess, are they tolerant or fickle, creative or book smart?

11. Physical traits: What is their body type? Does it impact their personality in any way? What is their weight, height, style, hair, and eye color? Do they have a disability of note?


Filling out these character sheets for your protagonist, antagonist, sidekicks, love interest, mentor and other characters in your book WILL be time-consuming, but once you know your characters' world as if you were living in it, consuming it, your writing will not only come alive on the page, it will go  much faster!



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